The Chasm of Doom (25 page)

(
131
) Replaced ‘newly constructed’ with ‘newly-constructed’.

(
132
) Replaced ‘empty but’ with ‘empty, but’. Replaced ‘checkered’ with ‘chequered’. Replaced ‘If you feel uneasy about the tavern’ with ‘If you feel uneasy about the tavern and wish to leave town’ as it was not clear from the original wording that your unease would lead you to leave the tavern, remount your horse, and attempt to leave town.

(
133
) Moved the choice regarding losing
ENDURANCE
points into the first position. Added ‘even when attempting to evade,’ to the first option.

(
135
) Replaced ‘one and’ with ‘one, and’. Replaced ‘counter-attack’ with ‘counterattack’. Replaced ‘Durncrag mountains’ with ‘Durncrag Mountains’. Replaced ‘Ruanon forest’ with ‘Ruanon Forest’.

(
137
) Replaced ‘foe but’ with ‘foe, but’. Replaced ‘Captain's’ with ‘captain's’. Replaced both occurrences of ‘Captain’ when not part of Captain D'Val's name with ‘captain’. Replaced ‘chasm of doom’ with ‘Chasm of Doom’.

(
139
) Replaced ‘action; for’ with ‘action, for’.

(
142
) Replaced ‘death cry’ with ‘death-cry’. Replaced ‘rainswept’ with ‘rain-swept’. Replaced ‘warriors, and’ with ‘warriors and’. Replaced ‘possibilities; a crypt’ with ‘possibilities: a crypt’. Replaced ‘make you’ with ‘makes you’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.

(
144
) Replaced ‘head first’ with ‘head-first’.

(
148
) Replaced ‘Captain’ with ‘captain’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.

(
149
) Replaced ‘prayer and’ with ‘prayer, and’.

(
150
) Replaced ‘floor and’ with ‘floor, and’.

(
153
) Replaced ‘leader; but’ with ‘leader, but’. Replaced ‘wall and’ with ‘wall, and’. Replaced ‘bow but’ with ‘bow, but’.

(
154
) Replaced ‘battle, the’ with ‘battle; the’.

(
157
) Replaced ‘awake totally’ with ‘awake, totally’.

(
158
) Replaced ‘head first’ with ‘head-first’. Replaced ‘by’ with ‘before’ in the last sentence for syntax clarity and consistency with
section 94
. Made the last sentence of the last paragraph its own paragraph for the sake of automatic formatting.

(
161
) Replaced ‘feet a sudden jolt’ with ‘feel a sudden jolt’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘face, then’ with ‘face which then’.

(
163
) Replaced ‘Vassagonian, but’ with ‘Vassagonian but’.

(
166
) Replaced ‘here, and’ with ‘here and’. Replaced ‘hard pressed’ with ‘hard-pressed’.

(
167
) Made the last sentence its own paragraph for the sake of formatting. Added ‘(If you wish to keep the Shovel, it takes up two spaces in your Backpack.)’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition. Replaced ‘
Action Chart
, and’ with ‘
Action Chart
and’.

(
168
) Replaced ‘Dull satanic’ with ‘Dull, satanic’. Replaced ‘move and’ with ‘move, and’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.

(
169
) Replaced ‘him and’ with ‘him, and’. Replaced ‘long curved’ with ‘long, curved’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(
171
) Replaced ‘mile you’ with ‘mile, you’. Replaced ‘journey, and’ with ‘journey and’. Replaced ‘Durncrag mountains’ with ‘Durncrag Mountains’. Added ‘(You have entered the Wildlands south of the Pass of Moytura and cannot use the Kai Discipline of Hunting to hunt for food in this desolate area.)’.

(
172
) Replaced ‘beyond and’ with ‘beyond, and’.

(
175
) Replaced ‘ambush and’ with ‘ambush, and’. Replaced ‘razor sharp’ with ‘razor-sharp’.

(
177
) Replaced ‘guards who’ with ‘guards, who’. Replaced ‘men who’ with ‘men, who’.

(
180
) Replaced ‘rockface’ with ‘rock-face’. Replaced ‘cavern and’ with ‘cavern, and’. Replaced ‘darkness you’ with ‘darkness, you’. Replaced ‘Maaken range’ with ‘Maaken Range’.

(
182
) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(
184
) Replaced ‘hit but’ with ‘hit, but’. Replaced ‘fight; a’ with ‘fight — a’.

(
185
) Added ‘(If you possess the Kai Discipline of Hunting, you are unable to use it within the Maaken Mines to hunt for food.)’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.

(
186
) Replaced ‘back and’ with ‘back, and’. Replaced ‘oily black’ with ‘oily, black’. Replaced ‘head, leaps’ with ‘head leaps’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(
189
) Replaced ‘the ranger’ with ‘a ranger’ in the second sentence. At this point, there are still several rangers left in the company. Also replaced ‘air and’ with ‘air, and’.

(
192
) Replaced ‘serated’ with ‘serrated’. Replaced ‘chest and’ with ‘chest, and’.

(
193
) Added ‘or if you have won in the first two rounds, ’ to the choice. Replaced ‘risen you’ with ‘risen, you’. Replaced ‘despatch’ with ‘dispatch’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.

(
195
) Replaced ‘back and’ with ‘back, and’. Replaced ‘horses and’ with ‘horses, and’. Replaced ‘shutters and’ with ‘shutters, and’. Replaced ‘tonight, and’ with ‘tonight and’.

(
196
) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(
197
) Replaced ‘gasp and’ with ‘gasp as’.

(
200
) Replaced ‘woodsmoke’ with ‘wood smoke’. Replaced ‘tower a tattered’ with ‘tower, a tattered’. Replaced ‘cottages and’ with ‘cottages, and’.

(
201
) Replaced ‘dry and’ with ‘dry, and’. Replaced ‘fungi absorbs’ with ‘fungi absorb’.

(
203
) Replaced ‘armour and ’to ‘armour, and’.

(
205
) Replaced ‘inwards and’ with ‘inwards, and’.

(
206
) Replaced ‘returned and’ with ‘returned, and’.

(
207
) Replaced ‘wall, and’ with ‘wall and’.

(
208
) Replaced ‘rockface’ with ‘rock-face’. Replaced ‘dead-end’ with ‘dead end’. Replaced ‘tunnel; a’ with ‘tunnel — a’. Replaced ‘excavated and’ with ‘excavated, and’.

(
209
) Replaced ‘battle cry’ with ‘battle-cry’ in the illustration caption. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.

(
211
) Replaced ‘Durncrag mountains’ with ‘Durncrag Mountains’.

(
212
) Replaced ‘well for’ with ‘well, for’. Replaced ‘chamber, and’ with ‘chamber and’.

(
213
) Replaced ‘normal Items’ with ‘normal items’.

(
214
) Replaced ‘lights, make’ with ‘lights make’.

(
215
) Replaced ‘chasm of doom’ with ‘Chasm of Doom’.

(
219
) Replaced ‘effort, do’ with ‘effort do’. Replaced ‘shute’ with ‘chute’. Replaced ‘slow and’ with ‘slow, and’.

(
221
) Replaced ‘here and’ with ‘here, and’. Replaced ‘stairs, by’ with ‘stairs by’.

(
222
) Replaced ‘it’ with ‘Captain D'Val's Sword’.

(
223
) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.

(
224
) Moved the Tracking or Sixth Sense choice into the first position.

(
225
) Replaced ‘burst but’ with ‘burst, but’. Replaced ‘sweat and’ with ‘sweat, and’. Replaced ‘small pink’ with ‘small, pink’. Replaced ‘leg and’ with ‘leg, and’.

(
226
) Replaced ‘tree-trunks’ with ‘tree trunks’. Replaced ‘Ruanon forest’ with ‘Ruanon Forest’.

(
230
) Replaced ‘items but’ with ‘items, but’.

(
231
) Replaced ‘bridge but’ with ‘bridge, but’.

(
232
) Replaced ‘Ruanon bridge’ with ‘Ruanon Bridge’. Replaced ‘boat you’ with ‘boat, you’.

(
233
) Replaced ‘warriors, dressed’ with ‘warriors dressed’. Replaced ‘advance but’ with ‘advance, but’.

(
236
) Replaced ‘weapon you’ with ‘weapon, you’.

(
239
) Replaced ‘arrow-slits’ with ‘arrow slits’.

(
241
) Replaced ‘rockface’ with ‘rock-face’. Replaced ‘to the east’ with ‘to the west’ to agree with
Section 101
. Replaced ‘turn to 309’ with ‘turn to 343’ to correct the error whereby in
Section 309
your men mysteriously vanish.

(
242
) Replaced ‘disc but’ with ‘disc, but’.

(
243
) Replaced ‘counter-charge, and’ with ‘countercharge and’.

(
244
) Replaced ‘crackle and splutter’ with ‘crackle and sputter’.

(
245
) Replaced ‘despatch’ with ‘dispatch’. Replaced ‘Your other man is also’ with ‘Your men are’ since there could be some confusion over how many men were with you, depending on whether you arrived here from
Section 127
or
Section 178
.

(
246
) Replaced ‘dull satanic’ with ‘dull, satanic’.

(
247
) Replaced ‘elite’ with ‘élite’. Replaced ‘highway and’ with ‘highway, and’. Replaced ‘firewood and’ with ‘firewood, and’. Replaced ‘incident and’ with ‘incident, and’.

(
248
) Replaced ‘mound and’ with ‘mound,’. Replaced ‘gap, then’ with ‘gap, and then’.

(
249
) Replaced ‘thin chiselled’ with ‘thin, chiselled’. Replaced ‘cavalry; a tall’ with ‘cavalry — a tall’. Replaced ‘tall dark-skinned’ with ‘tall, dark-skinned’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.

(
251
) Replaced ‘treeline’ with ‘tree-line’.

(
253
) Replaced ‘them and’ with ‘them, and’.

(
254
) Replaced ‘scouts but’ with ‘scouts, but’.

(
255
) Replaced ‘Captain, and’ with ‘captain and’. Replaced ‘Ruanon, and’ with ‘Ruanon and’. Replaced ‘leap on’ with ‘leap onto’.

(
256
) Replaced ‘bridge, but’ with ‘bridge but’.

(
258
) Replaced the middle choice ‘If you wish to dive into the tall crops and hide, ’ with ‘If you do not have this Special Item or this Discipline and Kai Rank, dive into the tall crops and hide by turning to 159.’ and moved it to the bottom. Also replaced ‘crops you’ with ‘crops, you’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.

(
260
) Replaced ‘despatch’ with ‘dispatch’. Added ‘or if you have won in the first three rounds, ’ to the choice.

(
262
) Replaced ‘strike but’ with ‘strike, but’. Replaced ‘head and’ with ‘head, and’.

(
263
) Replaced ‘trees you’ with ‘trees, you’.

(
265
) Replaced ‘blood-stained’ with ‘bloodstained’.

(
266
) Replaced ‘arrow-slits’ with ‘arrow slits’.

(
267
) Replaced ‘coup de grace’ with ‘coup de grâce’.

(
269
) Replaced ‘rockface’ with ‘rock-face’. Added ‘(If you possess the Kai Discipline of Hunting, you are unable to use it within the Maaken Mines to hunt for food.)’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.

(
270
) Replaced ‘approach and’ with ‘approach, and’. Replaced ‘a Torch’ with ‘a Torch and a Tinderbox’. Replaced ‘darkness, and’ with ‘darkness and’.

(
272
) Replaced ‘sommersaulted’ with ‘somersaulted’. Replaced ‘wounds, and’ with ‘wounds and’. Replaced ‘Maaken range’ with ‘Maaken Range’. Replaced ‘Items and’ with ‘Items, and’. Replaced ‘feet first’ with ‘feet-first’.

(
273
) Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.

(
275
) Replaced ‘ground and’ with ‘ground, and’. Replaced ‘you and’ with ‘you, and’.

(
276
) Replaced ‘Stoneworm and’ with ‘Stoneworm, and’.

(
277
) Replaced ‘pounce and’ with ‘pounce, and’.

(
278
) Replaced ‘trees but’ with ‘trees, but’.

(
279
) Replaced ‘arrow-slit’ with ‘arrow slit’.

(
280
) Replaced ‘bridge but’ with ‘bridge, but’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(
281
) Replaced ‘pounding and’ with ‘pounding, and’. Replaced ‘re-light’ with ‘relight’.

(
282
) Replaced ‘stiff but’ with ‘stiff, but’. Replaced ‘gives and’ with ‘gives, and’. Replaced ‘terror into’ with ‘terror, into’. Replaced the first instance of ‘click’ with ‘
click
’.

(
283
) Replaced ‘face and’ with ‘face, and’. Replaced ‘fire and’ with ‘fire, and’. Replaced ‘chasm of doom’ with ‘Chasm of Doom’.

(
285
) Replaced ‘bolts and’ with ‘bolts, and’.

(
289
) Replaced ‘deluge and’ with ‘deluge, and’. Replaced ‘Captain's’ with ‘captain's’. Replaced ‘help the Captain’ with ‘help the captain’. Replaced ‘ablaze and’ with ‘ablaze, and’. Moved the Warmarn choice into the first position. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.

(
292
) Replaced ‘blade and the semi-circles’ with ‘blade, and the semicircles’.

(
294
) Replaced ‘gantry and’ with ‘gantry, and’. Replaced ‘guards, then’ with ‘guards, and then’.

(
296
) Took out the second choice, which read ‘If you have a Flask of Holy Water,
turn to 283
.’ Replaced the bottom choice ‘If you do not possess either,’ with ‘If you do not possess this Special Item,’. With this choice removed,
Section 274
is no longer redundant.

(
297
) Replaced ‘Ruanon bridge’ with ‘Ruanon Bridge’.

(
298
) Replaced ‘blows, fade’ with ‘blows fade’. Replaced ‘mind, and’ with ‘mind and’.

(
299
) Replaced ‘fall but’ with ‘fall, but’. Replaced ‘rain’ with ‘rains’.

(
300
) Replaced ‘screams and’ with ‘screams, and’. Replaced ‘Captain’ with ‘captain’.

(
301
) Replaced ‘posses’ with ‘possess’.

(
302
) Replaced ‘pearls and’ with ‘pearls, and’.

(
303
) Replaced ‘ladder and’ with ‘ladder, and’.

(
304
) Replaced ‘air and’ with ‘air, and’.

(
305
) Replaced ‘slovenlinesss’ with ‘slovenliness’.